Seperately Together Comments

Though immediately painful, sometimes its better to move on. Best wishes.

What should I more about this piece. It is simply excellant. I get the fragrance of my poems here.

wow. i'm sad for the speaker. a touching write.

Couldn't be clearer therefore I assume that the distillation process to get there was intense. I admire the occasional rhyme, near rhyme and internal rhyme that pulls this all together and the steady rhythm that keeps the poem in constant motion.