Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Seperate Worlds Comments

Rating: 5.0

He lives in a world
Absent of light
Darkness overtaking
All aspects of his life
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Brianna Trombley
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Justin Unanue 24 January 2010

Painful love. Romeo and Juliet esque. But that's why they love each other, because they are both the complete opposite of each other. Your a good poet.

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Rachel Blank 07 March 2009

Wow, i love it! Great poem.

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, , , , , , 18 January 2009

ok so i'm completely jealous that i didn't write this myself it's just amazing i love how you've shown such a stark contrast but i've always loved the idea of opposites attracting

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Kesav Easwaran 17 December 2008

beautiful poem in short verses...wonderfully exposes the vagaries of human mind...’one of them only knows’...how true! ...ten for you, Brianna...

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Kimber Harrison 06 December 2008

Every poem I read by you is amazing, including this one! Keep writing, please!

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Zaibar Zee 06 December 2008

A great work, .... removing all social discrimination and giving hope to unite worlds and share love and sorrow... keep itup..., of course, Love is Blind :)

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Brianna Trombley

Brianna Trombley

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