Saturday, October 10, 2020

Seperate Ways Comments

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If you were with you me you'd be crying
As bit by bit your heart would be dying

I think we both just should move on
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Ray Hansell
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Soran M. H 10 October 2020

Sometimes love doesn't last forever Parting now would be for the better

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Soran M. H 10 October 2020

Separate Ways is a beautiful poem that sheds light on freedom and the sad part of love. Thank you for your honesty and your beautiful text.

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