Thursday, December 1, 2022

Separation Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

'I'm leaving you now, '
Said the leaf to the branch.
'Have a safe journey, '
Replied the branch to the leaf.
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Nosheen Irfan 02 December 2022

Great metaphorical write. Separation is painful but inevitable.

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Marvellous piece of poetry. Great images. Top score. Onto MyFavourites

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Kevin Patrick 01 December 2022

Winter leaves all things bare. A great evocative look at winter. Imagery is stellar. Top stuff.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 December 2022

Mike this was a hoot to read Top 5 Kudos

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David Wood 01 December 2022

A great write, keep it up.5*

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