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He turns his head to face her
Eyes glimmering in the golden glow of late afternoon
His hand, so carefully sculpted,
To form the delicate veins that curve
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I can feel both the sadness and the wanting not to leave. Bob
Fighting for liberation Against their eyelash cage. His lips part And with a soft breath He whispers his goodbye. i like this last part it is so emotional, i can even feel the pain of this part thanks for sharing
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7/22/2025 11:15:03 AM # 1.0.0
A simple gesture but you have painted with words a picture so poignant and human. Beautifully executed, Elinor. Top marks. Love, Fran xx