Wednesday, May 26, 2021

Separation ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am trapped in a net and you still have the wings,
Separation by death causes grief and pains, but temporary.
And separation while alive is a pain everlasting,
Same as of sun and moon that splits the day and the night.
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Michael Jack 27 May 2021

Pain for ever and temporary pain clearly done.

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Ricky Magnathen 27 May 2021

Wonderful perception about the seperation.

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Thank you so much dear Asim ji for reading all my Einstein poems. Much obliged

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A poignant poem... dear Asim ji. Top stars

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Separation is Separation! No matter, whether dead or alive.

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Kostas Lagos 26 May 2021

I love the way you are dealing with separation! Excellent

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Varsha M 26 May 2021

Yes death kills emotions but this separate deepens emotions and enlightening one own self.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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