Friday, December 4, 2020

Separation Comments

Rating: 4.5

Standing here today I'm strong enough to say
(without shame or prejudice)I did not leave.
I have forgiven you quite a while back
And have been living liberated since.
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Jeanette Telusma
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me poet yeps poet 13 May 2021

GIVE EVERY ONE INDEPENDENCE

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 December 2020

Parting is always painful. This poem, each line of it, can not be read without a heavy heart; heart growing heavier by every word. The pain of separation conveyed quite forcefully. A very emotionally charged

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Jeanette Telusma 09 December 2020

Yes.. you are right, Sir. For this reason it took this long to let it out. Thank you for commenting. Blessings to you always.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 December 2020

I felt sad as I read each line of this poem. 'I have forgiven you quite a while back And have been living liberated since.' - That's a good thing to do. A liberated life from dirty entanglements is better than a bond of thorns. My sincere commiserations and empathy for the poet. Life moves on, so will you and your children.

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