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You write whats in your heart, thats exactly what a poet is meant to do, great job from all the angles, keep up the good work

a beautiful poem in many was, honest, fresh, insightful. a poet of potential unfolding :)

Not to bad. Thanks for the suggestion. I give it an 8.

‘you truly are one of a kind........... :) btw i love you.’ ~ so much of premonition …finally happy finish …you’ve ability to carry forward till the last lines …a good poet does so…and you proved it… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10