Two hearts thrust onto separate paths,
Love's pledges no longer declared,
Fading into oblivion.....
Those tender moments we once shared
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Good morning Lora. A late Merry Christmas! Thanks for your support and recent review and comments. I am not getting notifications, sorry for the late response. I enjoyed this beautiful, sad, romantic poem. You have certainly a gift at bringing so many things into the mind of your reader. I was carried away by the words of this piece. Well done, Loyd
Your poem reminded me of Frank, an ex. We had love, but we were forced into separate paths, and my heart cried. But a new love was found, and life is now good. Thanks for the poem and the memory it brought. Darla :)
I'm sure the man that you lost would be very flattered, and possibly regretful, if he knew you were writing such beautiful poetry in tribute to the love you both once shared.