Saturday, December 27, 2014

Separate Paths Comments

Rating: 0.0

Two hearts thrust onto separate paths,
Love's pledges no longer declared,
Fading into oblivion.....
Those tender moments we once shared
...
Read full text

Lora Colon
COMMENTS
Jak Black 16 January 2016

I'm sure the man that you lost would be very flattered, and possibly regretful, if he knew you were writing such beautiful poetry in tribute to the love you both once shared.

0 0 Reply
Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 December 2014

Good morning Lora. A late Merry Christmas! Thanks for your support and recent review and comments. I am not getting notifications, sorry for the late response. I enjoyed this beautiful, sad, romantic poem. You have certainly a gift at bringing so many things into the mind of your reader. I was carried away by the words of this piece. Well done, Loyd

0 0 Reply
Darlene Walsh 28 December 2014

Your poem reminded me of Frank, an ex. We had love, but we were forced into separate paths, and my heart cried. But a new love was found, and life is now good. Thanks for the poem and the memory it brought. Darla :)

0 0 Reply
Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
Close
Error Success