Tuesday, May 24, 2016

Separate And Fenced Comments

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This distance
That lies
Between you
And my smiles
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Kishore Kumar Das 27 May 2016

You and your love are separate and fenced......but love can be ensured...how......the answer may lie in reading my recent poem, 'cheerfulness theory of love'......thanks for sharing your unique thoughts..

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Terry Craddock 25 May 2016

Instant Leaping Hurdle Fences physical fences fast succumb to instant electric volt high jumps when we need to jump space time distances separating oceans in a single finger keyed stride no towering tide can delay messages sent instant awaiting our homecoming voice pitch imaging trance transcend distance time space embrace in scoped meetings defying physical separations Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Separate And Fenced' by the poet Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi. Dedicated to the poet Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi. Written in May 2016 on the 25.5.2016.

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Terry Craddock 24 May 2016

physical fences fast succumb to electric high jumps, when we need to jump space time distances oceans in a single finger keyed stride, no towering tide can delay messages sent instant awaiting our homecoming, voice pitch trance transcend distance time space embrace in scoped meetings defying physical separations 10+

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Thank you my friend! Much regards. :)

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