Tuesday, March 28, 2006

Sentinels Comments

Rating: 4.8

They stand as sentinels against azure storms
Assured as most storms of life, it's supposed
Although bared of dress, although naked as jays
Winter's trees umbrella from worst of those
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Barbara Attaway
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Patricia Giuliani 28 January 2018

Magic way with her words

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L. K. Thayer 24 December 2007

Just beautiful! Gave it a 10.00! You wear your lineage well!

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Chuck Audette 29 March 2006

An ode to a tree is always good by me. Although I thought Live Oaks were evergreen, and 'bared of dress' seems to imply they are deciduous? My tree poem is 'Underdressed', seems like a similar musing... Keep writing, you have talent! -chuck

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Barbara Attaway

Barbara Attaway

Beaumont, Texas, USA
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