Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Sentinel Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.2

Some lover's jealousies are such a tight squeezing embrace<br>
that the loved one can't help feeling<br>
coiled and embroiled<br>
like in the grip of a loving beast or literally a bear's hug<br>
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 December 2014

Hey im a lady poetess not a mr.

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Melikhaya Zagagana 16 December 2014

Detailed and creative portrait of jelousy unfolded from a pure focussed and rare talents that we have. nice...Mr Zanub really liked.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 December 2013

thats a nice ink.beautiful concept.keep inking.

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Misnia Bahri Awaludin 23 December 2013

very true said lovely poetry

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Heather Wilkins 09 December 2013

jealousy can be very hurtful there is no need for it if two people are truly in love

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Muhammad Ali 05 December 2013

dear, wish u a happy life and what is more imp the life afterlife. all kind of happenings are there in our life and on this earth. angels or demons, on each side, there is human to play the role. what we should atleast do that atleast we should not be the demon. wish you peace dear sis. regards.

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Muhammad Ali 05 December 2013

dear, wish u a happy life and what is more imp the life afterlife. all kind of happenings are there in our life and on this earth. angels or demons, on each side, there is human to play the role. what we should atleast do that atleast we should not be the demon. wish you peace dear sis. regards.

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Stan Petrovich 17 November 2013

I seem to see some rather hidden meanings in this poem that I will not address for fear of failure. Overall it is quite heavy-hitting & I agree, on the surface, that which you put so bluntly.

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Liliana ~el 16 November 2013

Nice like how it was easy going and described both being protected but also caged Also like the relationships to stories and animals :)

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 November 2013

Hey valsa yor coment realy scared me. I fear my man cud b my assassin in his dark love! ! But i cant escape frm his clutches ah! : O

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Ramesh Rai 14 November 2013

jealousy is a natural phenomenon when love is getting its highest peak. for every right moment negative feeling leads to its perfection.

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Valsa George 13 November 2013

Jealousy in a lover can prove very dangerous in the long run though initially it may save you as a protective armour from the advances of other predators! But beware, the sentinel can turn to be your assassin! Great write! !

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Mohammed Albalushi 11 November 2013

jealously in love is good if its transfear the emotions but should be normal not over then it come very bad well write dear

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Ragia Sayed 08 November 2013

Great poem, , It took me to a fantasy world..

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