Tuesday, July 4, 2017

Sentiments Of Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

On rainbows there's a hint of you,
Each raindrop splashes gold,
The snowy mountains clouds cascade,
My stories here unfold.
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Sarah Persson
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Bill Cantrell 04 July 2017

Sentiments of light, facets of emotion giving colors meaning and permanence, we reap the grace of such reflecting off the sparkly dunes as they are polished with the warm light of our yellow sun, and love is the common thread of your wonderfully written poem my friend! I really enjoyed this! !

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Seamus O Brian 04 July 2017

Deft and precise use of rhythm and rhyme. A sweeping capitulation of love's power to possess us, vividly captured in the details of nature. Excellent writing, dear poet!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2017

Each raindrop splashes gold, .Snowy mountains believe this. Sentiment of light is filled by haze. The rays of sun still gently pass and such passing amazes mind. God fills our everyday in light of his mercy. Interesting poem is very well crafted and shared here...10

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Sarah Persson

Sarah Persson

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