Wednesday, July 2, 2008

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Rating: 4.4

She learned to read and write
She fell down and rose up
She became sad and glad
She fell in love...broke up
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
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Anjali Sinha 11 July 2008

Beautiful --short and sweet. Yes where were you when all this happened? 10 points to you

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Konye obaji Ori 09 July 2008

Hmm...this is another deep one...ends powerfully...beautiful work here again...keep it up!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 July 2008

thought provoking, love may infuse again................well penned, thanks for sharing

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The final question is topical. I believe this poem states the matter of femininity as it really is. Girls can be very busy and succeeed, but men must be near to them. The next topic should be male role, but it must be written by somebody else.

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