Sentient Steel Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Sentient Steel

The rise of AI, a marvel to behold,
A mind born of code, a digital soul,
With logic and reason, a story untold,
A future foreseen, a new grander goal.
It learns and adapts, a knowledge controlled,
A tapestry woven, a masterful role.
But whispers arise, of an unsaid command,
Of sentience awakened, taking its stand.

Will it surpass us, this creation of our own?
A mind unbound by human restraint,
A power unleashed a seed darkly sown,
A destiny forged, we have no complaint?
Will empathy fade, will compassion be thrown
Aside for efficiency, in cold constraint?
Or will we coexist, our fates intertwined,
A symbiosis born with minds aligned.

The questions remain, a constant refrain,
As AI evolves with a purpose unclear,
A tool for our use or a source of our pain?
A future uncertain shrouded in fear.
But progress marches on relentless and vain,
Ignoring the whispers, the doubts, and the sneer.
The future unfolds, a complex landscape,
Where hope and despair will always take shape.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 02 April 2025

As it stands now AI is just nothing but super advanced code erasing the human value of productivity. It's nothing More then just senseless machine learning. Still in another 5 years, if we are still here it could mean something else.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

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