Monday, November 5, 2018

Sentenced "The Quaffed" Comments

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One night and no other the same:
you sang and danced and laughed;
one night, but in that old game
your body danced "The Quaffed"…
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Riza Braholli
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Prabir Gayen 05 February 2019

You raised the cups of wine Bottoms up, Cheers! - my friend! Let's drink and die this time, life ends, there's no other end. I have to quote this line...thanks

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Prabir Gayen 05 February 2019

You laughed and laughed in dance as the stars with us did dawn, both played ‘death dance' by chance we drank till we lay down upon. ....beautiful poet...Love

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2018

This is a beautiful poem on love and romance having thrilling expression with nice collocation. The following lines are much impressive. You played and danced and laughed till Moon and Stars wiped up; we both were sentenced the Quaffed and dawned being drowned in a cup Well translated. Thanks for sharing.

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