Sunday, August 21, 2016

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Faint light made its way through the slightest rip in
Penetrated deep into sheer gloomy
Fragmented shards of darkness scattering on floor
Oh, asymmetrical look on stagnant floor boding catastrophe for future
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Moahammad Maleki
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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2016

Manacles! ! Seeing the ways of mankind today. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 August 2016

the territory of horror emperor Darkness Where is your shelter of eternal peace? like your words and expressions and the theme........ thank you very much dear poet

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Unwritten Soul 21 August 2016

The panic sound of a sentence can be hear as if echoes in mind..resonating the emptiness feeling against the sober thinking...i like this sentence of yours-I have lost the road while my logic is blind...its a nice line :)

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