Sensual Thoughts (Sharing A Sensual Delight For All Of You) Comments

A sweet love poem with good rhyming and a very sensual ending. It reads like both a story and a poem.

I’m waiting for Kelly to get out of the shower. …………………….. oops! too late. now I’ll REALLY need a shower! ! the rhyming is great, though all of the other words [put together with great sensualness] (see, Melvina, I can make up words*** also; you told me YOU do) , AND the relatively long lines, took some of my attention away from the rhymes. what is IN that “valley”? is it open to the pubic ………….. I mean public? ? what’s your phone #? I gotta get me some of this! to MyPoemList for sure. and I can hold this for the Sept. showcase. ok? bri :) p.s. *** this computer underlined “sensualness” in red. so I thought it was not an accepted dictionary word. BUT I checked and found it in a Google selection. ………. “Definition of SENSUALNESS : the quality or state of being sensual “

Ok, I need a cold shower now, Melvina.: -)