Friday, February 10, 2006

Sensual Scripts (A Poet Makes Love) Comments

Rating: 4.3

your hands speak a language
only my body can interpret,
writing mystical glyphs on my skin
inscribing poetry on the curves of me.
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Excellent. Sensual. Of high poetic standards and aesthetic beauty.

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"I know these secret tongues" of sensuality, beautiful

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Ivan Donn Carswell 07 December 2006

I'd have to add my congratulations to the list, a truely sensual poem!

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Elya Thorn 10 February 2006

The whole poem (Every word, every combination of words, every line) is sensual, powerful, mystic! Fabulous piece of work! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Patricia Gale 10 February 2006

Sensual, very nice.Love the line, writing mystical glyphs on my skin. Patricia

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Gina Onyemaechi 10 February 2006

Yep, sensual, elegant, entrancing writing. Kind regards, Gina.

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Shogunoka Ledesma III 10 February 2006

Nice poem...I never thought writing could be this sensual.

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