Sensitive Heart Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sensitive Heart

Rating: 5.0


Heart so sensitive and needs true friends,
Which helps to meet quick ends?
All worries in succession sends,
Fatigue; tension all its trends,

Anger is most reliable friend,
Pumping more blood and quickly send,
Help in downing and sudden collapse,
Loosing concentration and more lapses,

Emotions are best friends to come to rescue,
Sudden news increase flow of thoughts,
Pressure exerted and worries brought,
No prevention and suddenly caught,

Nerve and feeling centre for all,
Tears out with little sad call,
Tease the noise with sudden fall,
Warning to all when seeing high wall

Don’t identify and welcomes all,
No one reacts but it with ball,
Aching more with sudden pain,
When all efforts fail and go in vain,

Still seek more and more,
Never think doing before,
Advice to refrain so therefore,
If not sure of reaching shore,

Have all qualities like mother,
Think always about other,
Still get share of only tears,
Have to bear brunt of tear and wear,

I may not reject and continue to house,
Pesticides to kill insects and mouse,
But I crate mercy and passion rouse,
I stop function when nothing in use,

Handle with care and control the fears,
Not so eagerness when new cloths wear,
Not allow or sway bogey of tears,
No more shock and keep away the liars

Will continue to hold till the last,
Life is speeding and may end fast,
Never bad feelings and doubts cast,
Beats so slow without any mast,

In absence of you we will be stone,
Not belonging to any and stay alone,
No more feeling and think of one,
No hate, no love and care for none

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kashi Paul 22 September 2009

Emotions are best friends to come to rescue, Sudden news increase flow of thoughts,

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Umesh Lalvani 22 September 2009

Anger is most reliable friend, Pumping more blood and quickly send,

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Pami Panchal 21 September 2009

Anger is most reliable friend, Pumping more blood and quickly send,

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Lalvani Rekha 20 September 2009

Heart so sensitive and needs true friends, Which helps to meet quick ends? All worries in succession sends, Fatigue; tension all its trends

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Severina Dsouza 20 September 2009

Anger is most reliable friend, Pumping more blood and quickly send, Help in downing and sudden collapse

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 August 2021

A heart touching poem sir...loved it

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Darshna Chopra 10 October 2009

Heart so sensitive and needs true friends, Which helps to meet quick ends? All worries in succession sends

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Maulin Shah 07 October 2009

Heart so sensitive and needs true friends, Which helps to meet quick ends? All worries in succession sends,

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Saroj Davde 23 September 2009

Help in downing and sudden collapse, Loosing concentration and more lapses,

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Reshma Punjabi 22 September 2009

Pumping more blood and quickly send, Help in downing and sudden collapse, Loosing concentration and more lapses,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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