Thursday, February 16, 2023

Senses Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am so glad that I can see:
Pretty flowers, a bush, a tree.
My friends and family close to me.
Watch the wildlife - a honey bee.
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David Pass
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Nosheen Irfan 17 February 2023

Well articulated. Sterling imagery! Deep thoughts as well.

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Lovely lovely poem. Loved it, enjoyed the perfect rhyme.5*

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Jim McGill 16 February 2023

Yes, very well done…in all senses.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 February 2023

Bravo M. Pass Bravo! ! ! !

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Jayne Louise Davies 16 February 2023

Thanks for sharing! Well done x

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