Monday, June 21, 2010
Senses Comments
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The words were broken into sounds
And the time was cracked in seconds.
The seconds were dismantled slowly.
I grasped my love and I laid it in remembrance,
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
28 June 2010
Water-Fall poetry….culminated in, ‘I grasped the sense of life and I laid it over the sense of death’. The bottom and ultimate line… thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
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7/24/2025 11:22:20 PM # 1.0.0
for me I Like this one ' I grasped my love and I laid it in remembrance. And I heard the empty bell ringing in the sky '