Senses Comments

nothing can stop the truth from being seen, felt and heard. whatever, whoever, whenever can't block the victory of love and life. great piece!

darkness brought well in this work.... liked the way u presented it..

We are blind because we choose to be and deaf because we will not hear and so we suffer constantly .Because of omnipresent fear we will be called upon to do whatever needs to be done. I would much rather it were you i do not want to be the one The chosen one to lead the way though I wll gladly follow you But more than that I dare not say because I am a coward too

i love this its beautiful yet dark 10

we see with our inner eye, in fact, the oppressed can be very eloquenti n their silence. but why do we feel so helpless. we have no real leaders or herioes to fight tyranny. Collins has made a good observation about the double meaning in your composition. deeply insightful.10+

It is so sad that what you have drawn here is true. Our senses know the misery of the oppressed, b ut how many act to change? Thank you Bob

This is excellent work and very difficult to come by as you use double meaning in your structure, Closed eyes can see, Deaf ears can hear ect.... I thought your imagery was carefully used and potrayed a very well painted picture.. Bonnie

truth brought down well in the form of a well written poem..

so so true...........very well thought and penned indeed

One of the most original poems I've ever read - both in thought and expression. Deserves the highest rating and you get 10 from me.

WOW. I really liked the way you wrote this poem, it speaks for itself. Great job!

a wellcrafted poem. all the best 10

A powerful, clever and well-observed piece. Good write!

Nice work done here sir. thanks for sharing.

Dear Sathya Narayana, Good job

freedom from tyranny is the road to finding righteous sense comply not with dictatorial command to establish coexistence on our land

Your poems speaks volumes of unsaid semantics. They r very significant indeed. u get 10++

A nice composition with some beautiful lines- 'Closed eyes too can see - - Tight lips too can speak - - Deaf ears too can hear - - ' 10 added with love.

yeah a nice one tight lips too can speak deaf ears too can hear +regards anjali

A well written poem & your foot note explains the mood all clear! Yet people do interpret according to their own frame of reference! The first two paras suggested to me - the power of SILENCE! While the last para, - the Judgement Day! -Raj Nandy