Senseless Life Comments

Hi preetam, 'the days of forgiveness have gone.'...Even the mother nature will never forgive us for our colossal mistakes. We must face her wrath. We can't escape it. I totally agree with your views. Your poem has evoked these feelings. A good poem indeed.

i love the way you use the pharses'The heavens stand astound We have erased all our senses Even a bit that we found ' i love the whole poem so much i really enjoyed reading it.

We are killing our mother nature In a quest to reach the moon Without even realizing Catastrophe is coming soon This poem is so very relevant to our times. Enjoyed reading it a lot.

The heavens stand astound We have erased all our senses Even a bit that we found liked these lines. you present the present day problems.. making the reader more and more conscious.. thank you for sharing. i am also an indian. i understand you

We are killing our mother nature In a quest to reach the moon Without even realizing Catastrophe is coming soon These sentences speak the truth of destruction in every human construction.