Senseless Existence Comments

I see what you want to mean! And also I am sure that this is because of your secret power!

The idea flow is this poem is overwhelming. Great write.

Well done all the best I liked your work

Hello Amar. There are some very good aspects to this poem but - you did ask - improvements can be made, or at least the poem can be helped along. I think you should spend time putting your poems to one side for a week, and then look again with the eye of a critic. I believe you have talent, but it is not helped in the detail. Is the title mis-spelt? Scentless... lack of smell... should it be Senseless? Why small case i in line 6 and 14? Why lower case w to start line 7, and again in line 12? Are this typos? If so then it does not help the reader's eye. If we who dare to call ourselves writers but do not follow the rules we damage ourselves.

GREAT CREATIVITY.ALL THE BEST IN THE FUTURE.