Thursday, October 15, 2009

Sensei Comments

Rating: 4.4

running on the street
doing 8 to 1
60 seconds tiger’s walk
a minute-sharpen scratch...
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lady grace
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Miriam Maia Padua 27 October 2009

sensei.. great poem, dear friend I love how your words make the picture moves.. very interesting... and a wonderful reminiscing of something valuable...a wonderful and memorable acquaintance....a memory wonderful unforgettable memory SENSEI..(smile) ..Can you fix my belt.? Am I pretty? Is that it, red lepz? 10+++++ Lovelots, Maia

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Afzal Shauq 23 October 2009

she is a fighter with shuriken in her paws chopsticks on her hair a tiger fights with empty claws... awesome and fantastic...really a sweet and meaningful poem 10/10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 17 October 2009

good to read a poem on martial arts.........my style is kan-zen-ryu..........I practice usually thrice in a week.......... Anyone waana fight..: -)

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Eyan Desir 16 October 2009

We need some good fighters here! We will be glad to have you Good write Gracy...10s

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 October 2009

she is a fighter with shuriken in her paws chopsticks on her hair a tiger fights with empty claws....................... sensei is art to be performed by everybody for self defence... man can not become tigerbut can have skill like tiger....godd qualaity to come outat the timeof need...well versed poem with purpose....10

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Antonio Liao 15 October 2009

it's a Ninja..... a tongue twister of the lines.....a poem full of A “Sir' and everything has its purpose and command...each point knows where to go and gone....i like it...God bless...a 10

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Catrina Heart 15 October 2009

Karatedo, Ninjitsu what ever kungfu you have said it nicely in poetry...well done in vividness! ! ! Great flow.....i think u have done your daily exercises! ! ! 10+++

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