Wednesday, January 18, 2017

Sense Presence Comments

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Lay down beside the cool waters edge to listen,
Between each ripple and bubble that glisten.
Cast up your weary eyes and preside,
This boundless pool of space abide.
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Robert Merrett
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Prabir Gayen 20 December 2018

Thoughtful poem with nice diction... Beautifully penned.. Thanks. Dear poet..

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Chinedu Dike 19 January 2017

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in good poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Robert Merrett 19 January 2017

Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments Chinedu.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 January 2017

passionate embrace, good one

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Robert Merrett 19 January 2017

Thank you Gajanan for your comment

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