Tuesday, April 30, 2013

'Sense' Or 'Impulse' (A Sonnet) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shall my ‘impulse’ steal a victory
Or shall discreet ‘sense’ march on to win?
This is not a brief story
But a prolonged struggle outwardly unseen.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Mihaela Pirjol 23 August 2016

I like the creative way in which the aspects of both: '' sense '' and '' impulse '' are debated in this fine-written sonnet. The last two lines, makes for the perfect closure of it.

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Valsa George 04 July 2015

Sense and Impulse co habit in man like Siamese twins! One of the two cannot be totally exterminated! At times 'sense' predominates over impulse and vice versa! Those in whom sense predominates do less foolish things! That's the only difference! A very intelligent write, Rajesh. A 10

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