Monday, August 3, 2009

Sense Of Your Silence! Comments

Rating: 4.3

the moment you went away,
leaving me in this silence of defy!

was such a torture as it began,
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Siddartha Montik
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Sarah Shahzad 25 January 2020

You're absolutely awesome with words. This piece has so many wonderful lines that hit right to the core of the heart! :) pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my website & poems 2 thank you :)

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Ayan Mondal 12 February 2019

Very beautiful poem........

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 October 2018

Siddartha, such a well crafted poem........10++++++++++++

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Tiffany Saxon 21 April 2017

I absolutely love this poem! just beautiful!

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Ambrish Kumar 14 December 2016

I read you and feel that, the voice of silence is more louder than noise made by cry....

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Ravi A 04 December 2016

When a person is alive, we may not know his value. It is on reflection that we discover the person more and more. Fine write.

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Sister Frances 01 December 2016

So much can be said in silence and you captured just that. Keep writing there's promise of more great poetry to come :)

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Queeny Gona 28 November 2016

Value of a person is apparently known in his / her absence. Many a Times, it is the practice of mankind to ignore the one who cares for us and Chase after the wind only to realize at the end that we have lost the most beloved! Very philosopical read

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Sarah Mkhonza 24 November 2016

This is a very good. way of getting the world to Look at a story of feeling, loss and the muteness that happens between two people. It tells of the need to be loved back when you extend the feeling towards another. I like your poetry. It is simple yet With a depth that touches the human heart. Well done.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 November 2016

This silence of defy! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 16 November 2016

A silent beauty- -enjoyed much reading.

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 14 November 2016

Good read and great choice of words.

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Siddartha Montik 31 May 2010

Thank you so much Nivedita! ! ! Thank you so much for your comment made me cry, again reminding the pain I liked much! ! ! : (

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Poetic vacillation …fragrance … ‘it can never be a honest treat! ! ’ ...it climaxed the poetry to a limit of all highs ...fine diction …enjoyed much…thanks for such a fabulous poem… 10/10 [silently] Ms. Nivedita UK

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 26 August 2009

Nice work of a lone silence ending up a fragence scent-Interesting title, too.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 August 2009

Ammmmmazing eloquence! fine wording! 10+

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Mubeen Sadhika 24 August 2009

Awesome. The silence is captured in an extraordinary narration.

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Lalitha iyer 24 August 2009

I read your silence, wishing to read more and more to quench the heart's thirst...........thks for the invitation.

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Omar Ibrahim 04 August 2009

well done keep up the good writes.....thanks for sharing!

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