the moment you went away,
leaving me in this silence of defy!
was such a torture as it began,
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Siddartha, such a well crafted poem........10++++++++++++
I read you and feel that, the voice of silence is more louder than noise made by cry....
When a person is alive, we may not know his value. It is on reflection that we discover the person more and more. Fine write.
So much can be said in silence and you captured just that. Keep writing there's promise of more great poetry to come :)
Value of a person is apparently known in his / her absence. Many a Times, it is the practice of mankind to ignore the one who cares for us and Chase after the wind only to realize at the end that we have lost the most beloved! Very philosopical read
This is a very good. way of getting the world to Look at a story of feeling, loss and the muteness that happens between two people. It tells of the need to be loved back when you extend the feeling towards another. I like your poetry. It is simple yet With a depth that touches the human heart. Well done.
This silence of defy! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you so much Nivedita! ! ! Thank you so much for your comment made me cry, again reminding the pain I liked much! ! ! : (
Poetic vacillation …fragrance … ‘it can never be a honest treat! ! ’ ...it climaxed the poetry to a limit of all highs ...fine diction …enjoyed much…thanks for such a fabulous poem… 10/10 [silently] Ms. Nivedita UK
Nice work of a lone silence ending up a fragence scent-Interesting title, too.
Awesome. The silence is captured in an extraordinary narration.
I read your silence, wishing to read more and more to quench the heart's thirst...........thks for the invitation.
You're absolutely awesome with words. This piece has so many wonderful lines that hit right to the core of the heart! :) pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my website & poems 2 thank you :)