Wednesday, September 6, 2006

Sense Intunation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Watch me as I crumble
I'll break apart and die

Hear me as I'm screaming
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Faith ReAnne
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Brian Dorn 06 September 2006

Faith, terrific employment of all five senses in composing a truely melancholic write. Good stuff! Brian

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Steve Hagget 06 September 2006

Wow - great poem - full of emotion and well penned, Steve

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Faith ReAnne

Faith ReAnne

Michigan
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