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So very true. We need to slow down and smell the roses. This poem hits the nail on its head by confronting the reality of the mad pace of humanity.Good write.Keep them comming. We hav one thing in common, both of us have only posted one poem so far. I feel good to be the first to rate yours. Would you please read mine and let me know what you think?

im also scared to what we're doing to the earth with all of our consumtion of it.. great poem, crazy K.

you have messages blocked good work I like the poem the last line is how would you say perfect.