Thursday, November 10, 2005

Sensation Penetration Comments

Rating: 4.3

Sensation penetration, a diversion at the best of times,
At worst a crime of violent colours, as shadows feed,
As shades parade, breeding upon the insomnia of the sun.
Hoping as they prayed his time was done, yet here he comes
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David Lacey
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***** ********* 10 November 2005

Very well written poetic prose David. I read it twice. Opening ourselves up to emotion is a brave thing to do. I too wonder why we seem to run. I stopped running a long time ago. 9 from me. All the best Tai

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