Senryus Poem by anais vionet

Senryus

Rating: 4.7

We were at a small
bar, the place only served some
older regulars.

An elderly guy
in an old jean jacket was
talkative, friendly.

"What do girls learn at
Yale? " He asked. "We're taught things, like
expressions, smiling,

pomposity, snark,
whatevering and stuff-stuff."
I bragged shamelessly.

"Sure, " He chuckled, "sure
- but it's worth the money I suppose, "
he gave me a toast.

Limiting yourself
can, in fact, set you free - try
writing a Senryu

Like a martial art,
a tea ceremony or
classical music

They are a tight dance -
controlled, disciplined, focused.
Other styles can drift.

A Senryu is like
a Haiku except it deals
with human feelings

Senryus
Sunday, December 3, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu,haiku,poems,style
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 15 October 2024

Nice senryus.

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Rob Lamberton 23 September 2024

"Limiting yourself can, in fact, set you free - try"

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Bri Edwards 03 March 2024

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Bri Edwards 03 March 2024

senryu noun sen·​ryu ˈsen-rē-(ˌ) ü pluralsenryu Synonyms of senryu: a 3-line unrhymed Japanese poem structurally similar to haiku but treating human nature usually in an ironic or satiric vein' 'at a girl, vionet. : ) bri

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Rob Lamberton 25 February 2024

Beautiful feelings!

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