Saturday, January 30, 2016

Senryuaiku - Love Trap Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Sriranji Aratisankar 03 September 2016

enjoyed. really enjoyable...10

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Trapped in the arms of love.Lines that are both loaded and lovely!

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Valsa George 04 February 2016

A beautiful Haiku! Knowing it is a trap, many fall in it!

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T Rajan Evol 02 February 2016

I am too old to fall in this trap, yet recalling when I got.

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Nosheen Irfan 01 February 2016

10 for this beautiful haiku

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Nosheen Irfan 01 February 2016

Well, that's a lovely love trap to fall into. Love is indeed soft like the petals of a full-bloomed flower. Good work.

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Kelly Kurt 30 January 2016

Like a venus flytrap, love embraces and consumes

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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