Senryu, Xxi Comments

I would have taken a sip too.

Oh very imaginative Senryu! It's so interesting that you make a twist of story in the end.

very good also in english

Glad to know that you like it, Afrooz. Indeed, I've tried to give the sense of a classical senryu, where humor is most frequently expressed (as modern senryu may avoid humorous themes)

Great! 😄 I like the sense of humor!