Thursday, February 10, 2022

Senryu- With Friends Comments

Rating: 5.0

early morning sun
after chilling winter night
stroll and talk with friends
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M. Asim Nehal
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 February 2022

Asim ji, beautiful nature and beautiful friends. How fascinating.........10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 February 2022

Really interesting! Extremely well composed in its compactness!

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Chinedu Dike 11 February 2022

An interesting piece with vivid imagery....

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David Wood 11 February 2022

You paint a lovely picture.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 February 2022

I really loved the first two lines Overall I thought it was beautiful

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Unnikrishnan E S 10 February 2022

After a chilling winter night, dawn lights up the world and the nocturnal fog slowly lifts… marvellous

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