Monday, January 10, 2022

Senryu: Wisdom Comments

Rating: 5.0

In our universe
It's man that's blessed with wisdom
But fails to use it.
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David Wood
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Anjandev Roy 16 May 2023

This is perfect.....thank u, my friend....

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Rob Lamberton 12 February 2023

Such a sobering truth!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 January 2022

So rightly said in three brilliant lines. A great and incisive write.To my fav..

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Sandra Feldman 13 January 2022

That is our downfall. We don't learn from our mistakes! And pay no head to wonderful poets as yourself, that certainly know, what is at sta

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Sandra Feldman 12 January 2022

poet and respectful benefactor of us. Tjan k you so much!

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Sandra Feldman 12 January 2022

You also said, in the comments that 'Women are always wise' In the name of all of us, I want to thank you very much for that. You are a real gentelman

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Sandra Feldman 12 January 2022

How true, how true! Our Truth of Truths, never better said, In 3 great verses, so much about us is read.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 11 January 2022

There's the rub. A gripping verse.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 11 January 2022

Very true. I agree.5***

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NabakishoreDash 11 January 2022

All lines are true.

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KAVIN CHARALAN 11 January 2022

what about woman? man you mean human? DW

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David Wood 11 January 2022

Yep, should be mankind.....

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David Wood 11 January 2022

But in a Senryu I am limited by the three line 5,7,5 syllable rules........

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David Wood 11 January 2022

And I said MAN is blessed with wisdom but fails to use it. Women are always wise…….

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 January 2022

David beautifully put You ain't whistlin' Dixie

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