Sunday, March 20, 2022

Senryu - Wildfire Comments

Rating: 3.4

leading to darkness ~
when sunlight faint at twilight
a wildfire in heart
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M. Asim Nehal
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Richard Wlodarski 25 March 2022

Excellent senryu from the master of such.

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 March 2022

Nice poem. You have mastered the Senryu format

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 March 2022

A magnificent Senryu, deserves Full Score 5 Stars.

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Mamta S 21 March 2022

Crafty one..Wildfire signifies self enlightenment, it also signifies fighting till the very end. Courage and determination to life and fight till you reach the end of the tunnel.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 20 March 2022

I agree with Rebecca....Too good to comment and rate. Salute for this Senryu.

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Rebecca Navarre 20 March 2022

You've described an amazing feeling that's so hard to put into words! .. Again such breath taking beauty! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Gr8 Appreciation.

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Rebecca Navarre 20 March 2022

I can't even put into words how beautiful this is! ..

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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