Saturday, October 1, 2022

Senryu: While Going Comments

Rating: 5.0

While going afar
Turning to look back with tears
Rolling down from eyes!
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 21 February 2023

Well expressed with brevity. Tfs

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 October 2022

wonderfully beautiful in its simplity and sadness

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 October 2022

Thank you dear Poet Pallab.......To my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 October 2022

Looking back with tears! Truth of life asserted in senryu format - concise and powerful.......10

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Parting Is always painful, and we can only look back with tears.

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Pallab Chaudhury 02 October 2022

Thank you for your compliments. With best wishes.

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