Senryu - Unrequited Love With Moon Comments

Moon hides under moon and expresses sweet love. Moon beautifully motivates mind with greater responsibility giving calmness. An amazing poem is well penned.10

Brilliantly thought. One sided love and now moon knows that you are in love and you are trying to hide yourself and your love and feelings. Wow Seen such things in movies as sacrifice not through poems that too in three lines.

Moonlight! ! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Hahahaha it cannot hide from the love be it unrequited. Lovely senryu. I like the sweet surprise at the end.10++

A beautiful Senryu with unique love is amazingly shared. Thanks alot.