Saturday, January 23, 2021

Senryu - Unique Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

the rose festival
I pull her towards my chest
to collect petals
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M. Asim Nehal
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Zuzu Mutairi 25 January 2021

Nothing can describe love better than this Senryu. Full Stars

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Shreya Hacks 25 January 2021

Fantastic love poem.

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Rajnish Manga 25 January 2021

Three lines of the poem can easily outweigh hundreds of romantic poems because of the presence of Cupid or Kamadeva in its purest form. Thanks, Asim ji.

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Sharad Bhatia 24 January 2021

A magnificent senryu. Very beautifully expressed one word. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem.

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Michael Jack 23 January 2021

Lovely feeling in love, rose, love and fragrance all submerged in your Senryu.

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Kostas Lagos 23 January 2021

Good work my friend!

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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