the rose festival
I pull her towards my chest
to collect petals
Nothing can describe love better than this Senryu. Full Stars
Three lines of the poem can easily outweigh hundreds of romantic poems because of the presence of Cupid or Kamadeva in its purest form. Thanks, Asim ji.
A magnificent senryu. Very beautifully expressed one word. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem.
Lovely feeling in love, rose, love and fragrance all submerged in your Senryu.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good work my friend!