Senryu - Unique Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Unique Love

Rating: 5.0


the rose festival
I pull her towards my chest
to collect petals

Saturday, January 23, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: cute love,love and life,flower,beauty of rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 23 January 2021

Good work my friend!

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Zuzu Mutairi 25 January 2021

Nothing can describe love better than this Senryu. Full Stars

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Shreya Hacks 25 January 2021

Fantastic love poem.

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Rajnish Manga 25 January 2021

Three lines of the poem can easily outweigh hundreds of romantic poems because of the presence of Cupid or Kamadeva in its purest form. Thanks, Asim ji.

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Sharad Bhatia 24 January 2021

A magnificent senryu. Very beautifully expressed one word. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem.

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Michael Jack 23 January 2021

Lovely feeling in love, rose, love and fragrance all submerged in your Senryu.

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