Senryu - Under Waxing Moon Comments

Moon and life runs parallel.

Awesome

Profound love

Life dances around when moon is in heart, fabulous picture.

I agree with Rini, you are good at short love poems.

DJ liked the way your described the magical effect of love in your life, the moon is witness to it and the life is filled with joy.

Moon lit night and love both are good combination.. good one

Love is truly blind and waxing is a great imagery.

Great imagery in your three lines.

Waxing moon becoming life... awesome great sir.

Wow so well written, great imagery.