Senryu -Two♥'s Comments

The sound of melting glaciers is amusing in this poem.

Loved it two intertwined hearts sharing secretive whispers like melting glaciers

Through melting glaciers two hearts are amazingly sharing whisper with brilliance of mind. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

DJ liked it.10 on 10 for this poem and picture.

like melting glaciers........fine.....thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

Melting heart has many tales to narrate. Nice Senryu.

Let the glaciers melt let the secret whispers bear fruits Shirt and sweet senryu.10++

दो दिल मिल रहे हैं, . चुपके - चुपके Movie " Pardes" कि आज दो दिल को मिलने दो, आसमाँ मे चाँद को छिपने दो कर लेने दो प्यार की बातें उनको मोहब्बत से मोहब्बत करने दो बेहतरीन, बेहतरीन 10++