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A Hindi poet I read: - Main khojta tujhe tha jub kunj aur bun mein.....Tu dhoondhta mujhe tha tub deen ke watan mein A song from an Indian movie: - Bade peyar se milna subse duny mein insan re, Na jane kis bhes mein baba mil jjayen Bhagvan re, Keya jane kub shyam murari aa jaen bun kar ke bhikhari, Kahin laut na jaen palat kar liye bina koi dan re.

Beautiful poem showing us where to search. Thank you.

Wonderful Haiku...Devil in my heart smiles....Very true...Loved it.

very nicely juxtaposed.... enjoyed