Thursday, July 21, 2005

Senryu - Touch Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

you’ll long for the time
as patiently as the moon
for heaven to touch
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Don Haney
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Captain Herbert Poetry 28 April 2014

so elusive to touch the sky or perfect dreams. Great idea

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John Tiong Chunghoo 22 July 2005

moon sits in the sky as if waiting for day to dawn

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Don Haney

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