Tuesday, May 18, 2021

Senryu ~ To Express My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

wrapped in emotions
soul and the body bundled
to express my love
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 20 May 2021

Great lines to express love.

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Sugarti Va 20 May 2021

Class poem. Great effecticve

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*Sunprincess* 20 May 2021

Well Expressed.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 19 May 2021

Great work in few words. Kudos! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 19 May 2021

Excellent short work....thank u, friend

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Anjandev Roy 19 May 2021

Excellent short work.....thank u, friend

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Kostas Lagos 19 May 2021

A few words, a few syllables, a great result. So simple...Perfect!

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Indira Renganathan 18 May 2021

Expressing one's love to the concerned lover body and heart needs a preparation of how to emote it....well crafted senryu...5 *****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 May 2021

Absolutely cutest Haiku 5 Stars for you, Mr. Asim Sir! I like very much to read poems about the subject LOVE.Fantastic Haiku!

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Varsha M 18 May 2021

Beautiful expression Sir. You are King of syneru.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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