Senryu- Thoughts Comments

Another great imagery in this wonderful senryu. Essence compressed perfectly!

Brilliant write in its simplicity. This poem resonates for me.10

A lovely Haiku! I like the way you have tried to express your poetic mind! Loved reading it!

Wonderful imaginary. Concise but meaningful. Thanks for sharing.

Thoughts of life; with the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

That's a typical poetic mind. We all can relate to it. You have hit the nail on the head with this one.

Awesome....Nicely written

i like it. bri :)

My mind, coagulated mass, Love, melting it in aroma, felt but not seen!

You have given a solid form to the thoughts that gather in the mind.

You can read my mind :) This is exactly how I'am feeling and you voiced it.... Nothing less then 10 for peeping into my mind :)