Sunday, February 28, 2021

Senryu - Test. Comments

Rating: 5.0

another cold dusk
she loves me, she loves me not
few petal to go...
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 01 March 2021

Very philosophical.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 01 March 2021

Interesting game to play even when heart knows the answer.

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Unwritten Soul 01 March 2021

... and all love me, love me not petals reunite on the ground...but wonder still in the air

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Ricky Manhatten 28 February 2021

another cold dusk she loves me, she loves me not few petal to go...

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Kostas Lagos 28 February 2021

Woderful senryu. Take two petals as one if necessary to get the right answer!

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me poet yeps poet 28 February 2021

nice game to play on a sunday morning MAN

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Varsha M 28 February 2021

Sir doubt business not good. Do litmus test and get confirmed

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 28 February 2021

Wow great imagery. Loved the way you wrote.

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