Saturday, December 18, 2021

Senryu- Tears. Comments

Rating: 5.0

these ripples in love
spinning, emotional heart
tears roll down the cheek
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M. Asim Nehal
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Aarzoo Mehek 20 December 2021

It's a heartbreaking situation woven in beautiful words

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David Wood 19 December 2021

Love is tearful at times. Good Senryu.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 December 2021

this breaks my heart Bravo!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2021

tears roll down the cheek.....I can visualize the picture in my poetic eyes!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 December 2021

Brilliantly crafted senryu with great imagery.

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Zumas Millamo 18 December 2021

Wonderful senryu, tears are treasures.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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